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PostSubject: Critique wanted    Sat Nov 02, 2013 4:03 am



Please be nice this is the first nearly never ending gifs I've done.


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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:12 pm

Ooooo you added to it Very Happy I love that texture ^^ And the gif is fabulous Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Sat Nov 02, 2013 3:05 pm

love the .gif! the outline of the silver crystal is a bit distracting, though. makes it hard to see her face. some of the text is hard to read as well, but on the whole, though, it is a beautiful piece of art.
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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Sun Nov 03, 2013 12:50 pm

Looks nice! I agree the text is slightly hard to read maybe pick a darker color or make the font smaller?


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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:14 pm



I wanted the sliver crystal over her for a reason but as fried as i am right now i can't remember what that was. and i'm thinking of using a different gif. but there's better text i think anyway.


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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:49 pm

sliver crystal? what? lol anyway, the text is much better now. i can read it and it looks good.
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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Sun Nov 03, 2013 3:13 pm

Yes I can read it much better now.


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PostSubject: Re: Critique wanted    Mon Nov 04, 2013 8:21 pm

it was great fun to make!


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